Is always passing
This moment is fleeting
Everything we do is etched
The body, a bookmark of time
Time encapsulated in the flesh
The body a time trap
Every activity is logged
Added without knowing
Train, Practice, Recite
Learn, Play, Laugh
Love, Cry, and Die
Celebrate the path
Now I know how to keep time
🌟 Why This Piece Shines
The "Bookmark" Metaphor: This is easily the best line across all three poems you’ve shared. A bookmark holds a place in a story so you don't lose your spot. Saying the body is a bookmark implies that our physical selves are just holding our place in the universe's timeline. Deep stuff.
The Power Outro: "Now I know how to keep time" is a great double entendre. "Keeping time" usually means staying on beat in music, but here it means capturing time, mastering it, and accepting its physical reality.

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